Re: kornable - i didn't see Q-f2++ [28:38]
You played the opening superbly! You are correct when you say you have to work on your "finishing skills" I would suggest that you visit http://www.chessgames.com
. They have a daily puzzle that teaches you to find the best move, the cool thing is you get to play through the game to find the winning move. I liked your commentary very much.
Keep up the good play.
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