Excellent video and great game. Tactics from start to finish, some missed some seen! Like most games. I thought your commntary style has improved tremendously. You were very clear and no mumbling. The sound click off and on a bit I don't know if this has something t do with your mic but it wasn't major. Please post more games like this!

Thanks a lot! It's good to know I've managed to take on people's advice. What do people think of the length of the video? I never mean to make them so long but I find it so hard to keep track of the time when I'm commentating. I feel that if they are too long it puts people off watching. Do they need to be shorter and does anyone have any suggestions to help do this if it's needed?

I thought the time was fine but longer and it would be difficult to hold interest. You explained every move and some great side variations. I watched the whole thing with interest. Sometimes you can miss out the odd variation by saying 'this leads to an interesting variation but I'll let you work it out?' Leaves the watcher with something to think about.

You can also do a dry run and time yourself and then do the actual vid with some bits editied out.

Arrows were great and not too much. I thought this was a video of excellent quality.